More “Jest”-ing

OK. That's better.

Much has been made of the mold that Hal eats as a baby, and how it opens him to the experience of Pemulis's throwback drug. But John Wayne took the drug and himself had a reaction to it.

Also, I believe that Hal is permanently disabled by the drug, WHICH he has ALREADY taken when he happens across the luckless Ortho Stice stuck to the window. Hal seems fine, but Ortho immediately thinks Hal is crying, or upset. Later, the janitors (i.e. Hamlet's gravediggers) also believe that Hal is mugging in a way Hal never intended — and when Hal looks at himself in the mirror, his visage is composed and demure.

Once Hal reaches the Whataburger tournament (which happens two weeks after Stice's defenestration? Does that sound about right?), Hal believes he is speaking eloquently while the Arizona admissions people only hear horrifying gutteral grunts from him — horrifying enough to call an ambulance.

The day of Stice's window mishap, Pemulis discovers eight ceiling panels on the floor his sneaker / drug mule and its contents are nowhere to be found.

Did the ghost remove the sneaker, give it to Hal, and then bolt whosit's bed to whomever's room (Axelford? Troelsch?) it was? Nobody heard the ghost bolt up the bed, so the removal of eight ceiling panels would almost certainly be a quiet act for him.

Interesting too, that at ETA Incandenza's spirit is a ghost, while Don Gately refers to it as a “wraith.” Of course, Gately might have the advantage, so to speak, as he is able to see Incandenza's ghostly image.

the positivity continues

I have heard back from the PTB at The Make a Death Wish Foundation. He reports that although he doesn't read many plays, he ended mine wanting more.

Which I'm taking to mean that it's not overwritten, yet. Fantastic! I've also sent the fourth draft to TDS (aka Ed), who read an earlier draft and now will read the fourth. Prolly do the same with Illustrious Anne

Gerry, man, if you're lurking: I'm writing this one special, just for you.

Another great day for public school[teachers]

When [a] student asked the question about taking part in [peace] demonstrations, Mayer said, she replied that there were peace marches in Bloomington, that she blew her horn whenever she saw a “Honk for Peace” sign, and that people should seek peaceful solutions before going to war.

A student complained to her father, who complained to the principal, who canceled the school's annual “Peace Month” observance and told Mayer never to discuss the war or her political views in class.

Read the rest for yourself.

Fourth draft not done but proceeding

I've added so much to Count of Three that I decided to send it to another vict fresh reader. Justin of Make a Death Wish Foundation (MySpace) is a buddy from w a y back and he's got a similar celebrity fetish to my own. I hope he likes it but look foward to hearing any criticism, too, especially because he's very eductated as to all things Anna Nicole Smith-ian. (Smithesque?) On a lark, I sent him a PDF of Lindsay Lohan's Birkin, too.